graffiti Can control small piece #8 - Mess by Pensil - fading with the final

So i figured I would have another crack at the Mess piece on this tiny board in the workshop. Tell me what you guys think, which one was better. Notice that I used the black final for all the fading, no shadow black and no greys - that's how we did it back in the 90s before graffiti paint was available.

Also im around on instagram with more photos, check it out at
https://www.instagram.com/pensil_one/

Music: Roel Funcken - Leaved. Excellent music from Roel, if you like please support the dude @ https://funckarma.bandcamp.com/album/iridium-flare